What I liked:
How we added more characters and how the characters were relatable and how I hated half of them and loved the other half. I think it's good that not all f them are bland, like bland potato salad.
Also, the fact that there was so much to work with and so much more we CAN work about.
What I disliked/ What we can work on:
1. Evening things out, some things do not flow well.
2. What are we going to do with Taliss?
3. Yeah. Let's edit.
Heh..... - Just Ella.